I am a Year 6 student in the Uru Mānuka Cluster. This is a place where I will share my learning. Please note that some of it will not be complete, it will be my first drafts. Remember to be positive, thoughtful and helpful when you leave me a comment.
kia ora today I am sharing my D.L.O for what I want to be when I grow up! You will see o my D.L.O (slide) some facts about me (not really only one fact) -Aimee
Kia ora Aimee. These are really cool passions and I was not surprised to see that you want to be and artist or a singer. How cool would it be to be be both? What do you think you might need to do to be able to reach these dreams? A next step for your work would be to use a capital I when it's on its own and make sure you use capital letters where they are meant to be.
Hello Aimee, These Dream jobs are really cool and I would think they would suit you But a Singer and Artist is a great mix to be Because As an artist you can make photos for the main title of the song, But what can help you meet these dreams My next step for you is, Maybe add more into your dreams.
Kia ora Aimee.
ReplyDeleteThese are really cool passions and I was not surprised to see that you want to be and artist or a singer. How cool would it be to be be both?
What do you think you might need to do to be able to reach these dreams?
A next step for your work would be to use a capital I when it's on its own and make sure you use capital letters where they are meant to be.
Hello Aimee,
ReplyDeleteThese Dream jobs are really cool and I would think they would suit you But a Singer and Artist is a great mix to be Because As an artist you can make photos for the main title of the song, But what can help you meet these dreams
My next step for you is, Maybe add more into your dreams.